feedback from crit.

thinking about the bigger picture. i need to understand the background of the narrative, i.e the relationship between the characters, although its not important whether this is apparent within the animation.

initial character drawings and sketches ok - albern. however the 'other' character needs to be defined in this way, and his/her/its appearance in relation to the script.

use of colour, how this could represent feelings/emotion/significant events.

overall context, and how it may reflect the lyrics in the music. - 'obsessive love', need/longing for it'.